   Black Viper 2008-04-19 . chapter 30cool ending! |
| Wishmiester 2008-04-15 . chapter 1 Amazing. You need to continue. I told everyone I know about this it's so incredible. |
 their wingless angel 2007-08-28 . chapter 29well, that was pretty...but your wrong...this wasnt slash...slash is two guys or two girls...so like gay...UPDATE SOON! |
| their wingless angel 2007-08-28 . chapter 28 yay! only one more chapter! :[ that makes me sad! u need to update! |
| their wingless angel 2007-08-28 . chapter 27 THEY'RE OFF TO NEW YORK! anyway...nice job...:] |
| their wingless angel 2007-08-28 . chapter 26 ah...nvm...i get it :] |
| their wingless angel 2007-08-28 . chapter 25 huh...im confused...whast he doing...i suppsoe ill find out nest chapter... |
| their wingless angel 2007-08-28 . chapter 24 well, that was pretty...it wasnt as depressing as i thought i t would be... |
| their wingless angel 2007-08-28 . chapter 23 omg omg omg! omg! she shot her...omg omg...oh no! i must read! |
| Black Viper 2007-08-28 . chapter 29 Awsome story! one of the best! |
| their wingless angel 2007-08-26 . chapter 22 yay! it was story time...yay for my little emo boy i lvoe him ! :] |
| their wingless angel 2007-08-26 . chapter 21 gah...stupid man...i cant beleive he sent her to the hospital! and i cant beleive this happens in real life :] my little emo boy :] |
| their wingless angel 2007-08-26 . chapter 20 gah...i dont like Em...she angers me...and even though i dindt start reading from the begining, i started and im continuing :]...i love it :] |
| their wingless angel 2007-08-26 . chapter 19 :]...i love my poor little emo boy...i can so picture this story...i love it :] |
| their wingless angel 2007-08-26 . chapter 18 BECAUSE SHE WAS A PLAYA! lol...i guess ly little emo boy learned alot that day didnt he? :] nice job though...i love this |
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