you can't hate it. nope.

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the poem was gorgeous. what more can I say that hasn't? the words tied in place are absorbing and weave such a delightful feeling into you. I adore it. there are no lines that I don't find brilliant or fitting to the piece.

* noelle

all the colours and imagery! LOVE IT. absolutely gorgeous, the kind of poem you read over and over again only to find new things within each line and new resonance and M. i can't find a line i like the most because all the lines are just so, so gorgeous.

Ooh nice. Really liked this one! As usual your images show up very strongly. Powerful, as usual. )

The imagery is all really abstract and so is the language, but there is a delicious underlying thread of emotion running through all three stanzas that link them up and I think that's where you shone ).

Wow... that's a whole lot of imagery. Wonderful imagery, to be exact. Awesome! XP