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| Caleum 2006-02-22 ch 1,  | abusethis sounds painful..very painful...the last four lines are very powerful. I feel sorry for your friend. nice description though. |
| Frosted Midnight 2005-11-02 ch 1, | abuseoh...very good...remind me never to get on your bad side .. |
| K.D. Wagner 2005-11-01 ch 1, | abusethe emotions in this poem are great...and the ending closes it well. keep up the good work! |
| Moon-Chaser 2005-09-27 ch 1, | abuseVery strong, very powerful and very angry. I love it, the ending was very well done. Keep it up. |
| sam the bear 2005-09-25 ch 1, | abusehmm...very different from what you wrote on your bio. well i know Austrilans don't talk like that - casue i'm living there and no we don't ride in kangroos pouches thats just gross. well if this is for ur um... friend i don't think she is much of one... (after you've killed her) |
| Princess-anna57 2005-09-25 ch 1, | abuseWow... you scare me... lol. ^_^ Hehe, great work! Keep writing! ~Anna~ |
| BlueJayWalking 2005-09-22 ch 1, | abuseWho! *shivers* That was really something. What did your friend do to make you this mad? Hmm anyway, this poem is really powerful and raw and simply FILLED with emotion. You certainly managed to capture your feelings well! Keep writing!:) |
| Inherent 2005-09-18 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was extremely powerful. The way the poem was so...blunt it almost makes you shiver. But that's a good thing. |
| Moonjava 2005-09-15 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is how should I say it ... Vicious. But I really like it. P-S. Thanks for reviewing 'Through The Cracks'. Yes this is about my life. I put that in the summery. However, I all so added auto-biography in the summary. Any ways. Take care and thanks. |
| cky4life 2005-09-05 ch 1, | abuseintense. very intense. i feel the pain/anger in this. which is good in a poem to feel the emotion of the author. very nice. thanx for the sweet review |
| Angel Underneath 2005-08-31 ch 1, | abuseIntense. You can literally feel the pain that you're going through and the pain being inflicted onto the other person. |
| Lay Me Down 2005-08-30 ch 1, | abuseWow.That was pretty harsh. Yet, I find it creepishly satisfying. Some people really do deserve what you wrote. And it sucks even more knowing that people like them actually exist. M. |
| SliversofSilverPain 2005-08-28 ch 1, | abuseWoah... Very kool. nice image at the end. Very angry though, still cool, tho |
| Hopeless-and-helpless01 2005-08-28 ch 1, | abuseYou really are angry at your 'friend'. Sheesh...Poor person but i do get what your trying to get at...I liked it. Oh and thx for the review...It was vry nice.Cheers, Dani |