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| XxVendettxX 2005-10-29 ch 1,  | abuseVery unique structure, great tone and voice. |
| unwritten 2005-09-02 ch 1, | abusei can relate, i think we all think this at sometime or another. nice job, i really liked it. |
| ancient trees 2005-08-31 ch 1, | abuseLove! I like this a lot a lot. I just took the periods seperating the 'i's as a stylistic choice, and I kinda enjoyed it. Yeah, FP loves to pick on me too, I still haven't gotten the hang of getting it to quit putting spaces between the lines of my poetry; that's why I took to doing it all in one stream of nonsense. (and all this time you just thought I was being clever.) ^^ |
| Isis ShadowWolf 2005-08-29 ch 1, | abuseI've always hoped that... but it hasn't worked yet... I like this poem, it really gets you to thinking about abstract concepts. Nice work. |
| Suicidal Skies 2005-08-28 ch 1, | abuseDesperate, and so needy. I absolutely loved it ^^ |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-08-28 ch 1, | abuseDeep, and well-detailed, I loved it, keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |