nicely put. i like the repetition and the words chosen. write on :)

This is so good, very heartfelt and I really like the repition, it works really well. Great job! QueenVixta

i love how writers utilize the eyes just as much as a painter. it's endearing to see bolds matched with plain text, and it serves i suppose to reinstate the fact that writing is an art. that said, one can only wonder at the potentional you have at this art. never ceasing to meet expectations and break them. expecting nothing less, and an delightful read is about all the material of a review i can give.

kakyou