 Horse Raider 2005-09-11 . chapter 1This is very strong and touching... i love it! |
 simpleplan13 2005-08-31 . chapter 1nice poem.. turns a crappy situation into a good one.. nicely expressed |
 transparency93 2005-08-30 . chapter 1:) loved it. can relate totally. :) |
 poetic abortion 2005-08-30 . chapter 1beautiful, simple and romantic.
~* noelle |