oi...the pain seems so raw and intense. but don't worry if it doesn't kill ya, it only makes you stronger. ;D don't give up, after all tomorrow's another day. :)

A very powerful poem.

You've managed to make the reader feel your emotions and venture through the same desperateness.

Nicely done, but try not to feel that down often :)

sadly beautiful. very good. it sounded like a song. perhaps turn it into one? idkanyways, like i said, job well done. keep writing.

mysteriously yours,shadowofyou

Deep, and well-detailed, I loved the strength that you gave off in this, it was really empowering. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.