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PJC Macall 2008-09-15 . chapter 5
PLEASE DONT STOP!
kitvampie 2008-04-22 . chapter 5
Oh! you have to post the next chapters!
I recently reread Snowdance, and figured I should probably read your other stories, and now that I've started I can't get enough :P
Sweetie Pie 2007-03-16 . chapter 5
Great to see another chapter, BUT there is just one thing. There is no such word as "Beeves". When one refers to Beef, it is usually in the consumer context, ie. meat. The word you should use is "Cattle".

Look forward to your next update.
Sweetie Pie 2007-02-22 . chapter 5
First time in ages, I've looked in FictionPress and really glad to see your rewrite. Thank you! I'm looking forward to more chapters soon.
NOTPOSTING 2006-03-20 . chapter 5
Yay! UPdate, love it love it love it!! Looking forward to more! Update soon!!
Desert Illusion 2006-03-18 . chapter 5
I liked this chapter, but the only complaint that I have is this: it's too short. lol! I feel like there needs to be more information given since it's like you know, the beginning of the story, and the personality of all the characters needs to be established. As well as a bit of background info as to what part they will be playing in the chapters to come. They ending seems a bit abrupt. That's all the criticism that I have for now.

Anyways, UPDATE SOON!

-Maha
Midnight Resolution 2006-03-15 . chapter 4
I love your story so far. I hope you keep updating! I can't wait to read more.
Desert Illusion 2006-03-14 . chapter 4
YAY! Another update!? This is awsome! Oh and CONGRATS on your husband coming home safe from Iraq. You must be relived.

Anyways, I really enjoyed reading this chapter. Events are about to unfold, and I can't wait to see how bad they become. *grins* Isn't it always fun to put your characters into hard-to-get-out-of-situations?

Elizabeth was a bit..."civil" I must admit. No nasty rude comment...yet. I have a feeling she's not going to be civil at all once she finds out about the kiss that took place b/w Sam and Geoff. Oh, fun things are coming up! Can't wait for Sam's retorts though. *winks*

Anyways, take care and UPDATE SOON! I can't wait for more!

Love ya!-Maha
anon 2006-03-13 . chapter 3
Hurrah, you updated! That Elizabeth is going to be such a **...
Desert Illusion 2006-03-13 . chapter 3
Oh! Look who's back and writing!? Awsome chapter! I'm not quite looking forward to Elizabeth's "welcome" in the next chapter. She is one girl that you wouldn't to cross paths with. But I'm sure Sam has quite a few of retorts saved. At least I hope she does. One of those cheeky and "plesent" comments will put Elizabeth in her own place. I hope all goes well, though.

Anyways, take care and UPDATE AGAIN! I so CANNOT wait for another update. I was sure you had forgotten about this story, but I was wrong! yay! Keep writing.

Until next chapter,-Maha
Lillita1957 2006-03-13 . chapter 3
I can't wait to see what happens next! Great chapter!...
Sweet_Dreams 2006-03-13 . chapter 3
Ohh...intriguing! Hope this chapter means you'll be updating regularly again. I want to find out more about Sam and Geoff.
wolf-of-the-dark-night 2006-03-10 . chapter 2
Hey, I've read Snowdance more time then i can remember and i LOVE it! I'm begging you ~gets down on knees~ PLEASE UPDATE! I miss reading your stories everyday or everyother day! I know this story is gonna be a good as the last one!
NOLONGERPOSTING 2005-12-06 . chapter 2
Yay!! Now you can update again!! I read your other story and really enjoyed it. Too bad I couldn't catch this story in its completion, and hopefully you won't take too much time updating!!
katieee 2005-09-05 . chapter 2
This is a really good story so far! I love it! Can't wait to see what happens next!

♥K3aly
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