I'm not usually a fan of poetry, but this was pretty good. The imagery is astounding.

"Hate can glint like blood on knife/ Such a horrible disease for you to witness/ Don’t tell me you didn’t enjoy my pain/"

Good stuff.

dude, where did these dark thoughts come from?!? man, i love this poem though. great wording and imagery. and awesome similies. "Spirit gone and body dead No more room for thoughts of dread Drink my soul and take my life Hate can glint like blood on knife" some of my favorite lines. great job again.