|Reviews for In The Eyes Of God|
| Alankria 3/13/06 . chapter 8
A-ha, I understand the German at the end there. Gotta love learning about the Nazis, it teaches you all sorts of random German phrases.
Also, I think in the very last sentence, you mean 'sight' and not 'site'.
| Alankria 3/13/06 . chapter 7
Nice way to show what a sick bastard Abraham is. And yet I suspect there is more to this than just religious fanatacism, perhaps because Abraham's final words so closely echoed the title of this story.
| Alankria 3/13/06 . chapter 6
This Nadeb sure is a nasty guy. I look forward to seeing how this conflict develops, and I suspect that Sophia will not fall prey to his machinations.
| Alankria 3/13/06 . chapter 5
I was wondering when I'd see these two again. Good chapter! Makes me wonder what happened.
| Alankria 3/13/06 . chapter 4
Sorry it's been so long since I last looked at this. I liked this chapter; Sophia is an interesting character, devoid of many human features.
| Alankria 1/28/06 . chapter 3
My one quibble with this chapter is that I have no idea where this is happening, which planet, when, etc. Some clarification would be good. Other than that, interesting chapter.
| Alankria 1/28/06 . chapter 2
'followed by an insane cackling what put Joel on edge.' - Egad! That made me flinch! Please change 'what' to 'that'.
'Insanity's overrated'... great line!
| Alankria 1/21/06 . chapter 1
Hmm, interesting beginning. Connotations of the Matrix here, but in a different and original way. I like the semi-deity's name :P
| Arkash 1/2/06 . chapter 11
Exciting new chapter here.
CC: "Sophia [threw] her notes into her backpack, and yanked..."
Sophia is a cool character; nice evac plans. *_*
| Arkash 11/19/05 . chapter 10
So it begins, it seems. Interesting dialogue.
It might be helpful if you specified who's speaking, at least in the first two paragraphs.
Good job. *_*
| Arkash 10/15/05 . chapter 9
Interesting chapter. Curious to see what she'll decode.
In the last paragraph you use the name Agatha instead of Sophia.
| Alnitak Z Orion 9/13/05 . chapter 8
An interesting vision for Joel. Or perhaps I should call it a sending.
Good Job, as always. *_*
| Alnitak Z Orion 9/9/05 . chapter 7
Good protrayal of religious zealots. In the name of God, they can do anything.
Yuck, wouldn't Abraham be afraid of catching some diseases?
Good job, as always. *_*
| Alnitak Z Orion 9/8/05 . chapter 6
Very interesting, and clever to use public outbrake to kill infidels.
You're jumping POV again, from Hagia to the Reubenist agent, Nadeb. You need a divider.
Keep up the good work! *_*
| Arkash 9/7/05 . chapter 5
This is very interesting, if a bit confusing. The only thing I can think of is that the Hell place Joel dreams of could be a holding place, like downloaded souls for future worlds.
I suppose I will find out.
Good Job! *_*