A-ha, I understand the German at the end there. Gotta love learning about the Nazis, it teaches you all sorts of random German phrases.

Also, I think in the very last sentence, you mean 'sight' and not 'site'.

Interesting chapter!

Nice way to show what a sick bastard Abraham is. And yet I suspect there is more to this than just religious fanatacism, perhaps because Abraham's final words so closely echoed the title of this story.

This Nadeb sure is a nasty guy. I look forward to seeing how this conflict develops, and I suspect that Sophia will not fall prey to his machinations.

I was wondering when I'd see these two again. Good chapter! Makes me wonder what happened.

Sorry it's been so long since I last looked at this. I liked this chapter; Sophia is an interesting character, devoid of many human features.

My one quibble with this chapter is that I have no idea where this is happening, which planet, when, etc. Some clarification would be good. Other than that, interesting chapter.

'followed by an insane cackling what put Joel on edge.' - Egad! That made me flinch! Please change 'what' to 'that'.

'Insanity's overrated'... great line!

Reading on..

Hmm, interesting beginning. Connotations of the Matrix here, but in a different and original way. I like the semi-deity's name :P

Hey,

Exciting new chapter here.

CC: "Sophia [threw] her notes into her backpack, and yanked..."

Sophia is a cool character; nice evac plans. *_*

So it begins, it seems. Interesting dialogue.

It might be helpful if you specified who's speaking, at least in the first two paragraphs.

Good job. *_*

Interesting chapter. Curious to see what she'll decode.

In the last paragraph you use the name Agatha instead of Sophia.

An interesting vision for Joel. Or perhaps I should call it a sending.

Good Job, as always. *_*

Good protrayal of religious zealots. In the name of God, they can do anything.

Yuck, wouldn't Abraham be afraid of catching some diseases?

Good job, as always. *_*

Very interesting, and clever to use public outbrake to kill infidels.

You're jumping POV again, from Hagia to the Reubenist agent, Nadeb. You need a divider.

Keep up the good work! *_*

This is very interesting, if a bit confusing. The only thing I can think of is that the Hell place Joel dreams of could be a holding place, like downloaded souls for future worlds.

I suppose I will find out.

Good Job! *_*