dear me.. i like this poem! i love the words you used (for some strange reason i can never write good poems)! but i have to admit: i didn't get the meaning behind the 'wrigglers'. it does take a lot of interpretation doesnt it? dear dear me... i suck at that sort of thing.

I don't know WHY!? But there's something about it that makes me read it OVER and OVER AGAIN!! I've read it three times before I wrote this review..Its-- odd.. real odd...I DON'T KNOW BUT THERE'S SOMETHING ABOUT IT THAT I CAN'T EXPLAIN MY LIKING FOR IT!

Greetings,Cool poem! Though it makes me think of those damn tadpoles that wriggle out of the mother frog's back. The freaky ones. (LOL) (evil grin) *oh bad thoughts! bad thoughts* Anyway, I'd rate it 9.5 over ten for the words used. Point is, Really Cool! That's all!

EKV

This seems a like a VERY surreal poem. I like surreal things, though. :) It reminds me a bit of e. e. cummings and his odd style of writing. Also, it seems semi-Lovecraftian. What exactly inspired this?

Deep, and well-detailed. I loved it, keep up the goo work.

Much love,Juliet.