totally cool and interresting...not exactly my favorite style..but good none the less. one word of warning though...be careful with ideas ...i know...but the whole magic school and manual labor reminds me of another...magical book...hp perhaps... cheers~SE

oh that was nice! i liked the ending. i wonder what is going to happen? i like how you added quite a few describtions that were detailed. nice job. update soon.

-Artemisp.s. thanks for reviewing Fynncara. I'll try to get the next chapter up soon. I just started school again so i'm alittle busy. ugg...AP Calc is a killer! can't believe I took this class for senior year! well, anyway thanks again and i'll try to update soon.