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Reviews For: Fire Poem
Seth Triskellion 2005-09-04 . chapter 1
A Fire Inside! ahem sorry. this was hauntingly good... absolutely wonderful. I love the inner fire that needs to be released aspect of it, it makes you feel of things that burn your heart that only need their fire set loose to changethe world. :)
Learah Kaelar 2005-08-30 . chapter 1
Wow, that's KRAZY good! I should probably be practicing for the play auditions, but I decided to go here instead. How fun! Anyway...this is cool. I love the last line, its so...damn, I'm running out of words. Oh, well. That I'm listening to rammstein right now either, but the 'as stone-cold slow/flows the riverbed' part confuses my brain. Or it could be that I've just finished my math homework...the poetic part of my brain will be back online in about half an hour. Anyway, I love kathy!! And kathy's poetry! We! Oh yeah...I'm glad you liked 'Candy and Lullabies'. Did you read the first version of that? I think the new ones better. But those last 2 lines in the first verse-thing don't flow right to me, and I was hoping you or someone else could point it out to me, so I'd know I wasn't crazy. But anyway, I've still gotta do stuff, so I'll leave you alone!Blessed Be!
Angel Underneath 2005-08-30 . chapter 1
I get such bizarre imagery for this and i love it, its like creating your own Escher. I think im inspired to paint
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