 Learah Kaelar 2005-08-30 . chapter 1Wow, that's KRAZY good! I should probably be practicing for the play auditions, but I decided to go here instead. How fun! Anyway...this is cool. I love the last line, its so...damn, I'm running out of words. Oh, well. That I'm listening to rammstein right now either, but the 'as stone-cold slow/flows the riverbed' part confuses my brain. Or it could be that I've just finished my math homework...the poetic part of my brain will be back online in about half an hour. Anyway, I love kathy!! And kathy's poetry! We! Oh yeah...I'm glad you liked 'Candy and Lullabies'. Did you read the first version of that? I think the new ones better. But those last 2 lines in the first verse-thing don't flow right to me, and I was hoping you or someone else could point it out to me, so I'd know I wasn't crazy. But anyway, I've still gotta do stuff, so I'll leave you alone!Blessed Be! |