Thanks so much for the review. I was beginning to think it wasn't all that good and was deciding to pull it and sorry I didn't update sooner it's been awhile since I've actually sat down at a computer. Now to find my files. Again thanks for the reply.

more've a preface than the first chapter, but i love that you started with the lullaby. i love that lullaby, which is what attracted my attention in the firs tplace.

i have stories/ideas like this! stories that i just can't put down on paper because i can't find the right words, ideas that just won't cooperate... but it seems you've found a good beginning. anyway, onto the actual story.