That was, AWSOME! keep writing! I loved it!

Hey, nice, you managed to take an old idea and keep it interesting. I like the imagery, the specific choices of flowers and animals make this a lot better than if you'd just stuck with "flowers." I like how you're addressing the traveler also, this could be made into a very cool song. :)

Just a tip, you might want to make those tigers LIE among the leaves, since I think that's what you meant. ;)

Other than that, very nice job.

what sublime imagery!! this is truly a poem worth reading more than once! i love how you've created such an original piece from the old myths and stories about fairyland. a poem well written, to be sure! *applause*