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selfish4more 2008-05-07 . chapter 14
more i need more please iam beging you please need more, i love iggy and the prince they are the freaking best please let her end up with one of them or both the rest of the guys are o.k but they would not be good for nina buy the way love the name and the crazy hunter guy just needs to die,i love iggy he acts like he know eveything about anything and the prince can shore like with a strate face i just loved it, it's the best please write more soon i put you on my favorite list and alert list cause it's killing me not to know what happens next i am officaly a big fan of yours...^-^
cat-and-mouse 2008-01-10 . chapter 14
*looks from left to right*
Okay, I personally don't like Quinton too much. I'm rootin' for Iggy! *waves a li'l Iggy flag* GANBATTE, NE!
TeaspoonKisses 2007-07-12 . chapter 14
Wow I love the 5 gents so much! I was laughing the entire time I read, it's so good, I hope you update soon :D
Pacifist Soldier 2007-05-10 . chapter 14
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in so long! I loved the interactions between the characters. The way they play off of each other is amazing. Delmar's spiel on earth history and genetics was brilliant, and Iggy and Gaia are almost like a stand up comedy duo. You're doing a much better job at keeping the homophones and grammar in line, but this one line:

“But there the one’s who need the most watching!”
should have read
"But they're (they are) the ones (not a possesive who need the most watching!"
Keep up the good work!

PacSol

P.S. Feel free to virtually slap me upside the head if you think I'm being a bit anal retentive. Truth be told, I'm known among my friends as a bit of a grammar stickler. Your story's still great, though, and I look forward to the next chapters!
Heaven-Sent00 2007-05-05 . chapter 14
*pensive look* update soon please, I must find out what happens!
Sir Exal 2007-01-06 . chapter 14
How nice. When I finally get around to going in and updating my harem story, you update yours. Hooray!

The monologues were by far the best parts of this chapter, though that's not to say that the dialogues suffered; they were great as well. It's good to see you can take a break from action scenes.
The Black Dhalia 2007-01-03 . chapter 13
It's been 4 months and 9 days since you last updated (yes, I counted) and please update! I love this story too much! It's so addicting! (And I wanna read about the first kiss. ~.^)

You are a great author. You give nice, lengthy chapters that are grammically right and all of the spelling is right. YOu make the characters seem so real. It's like I'm watching it on TV. And once again, it's addicting. @_@
leemya 2006-10-05 . chapter 13
love your work!Please continue!
pumpkincrackkiller 2006-08-27 . chapter 13
EKK! he's gay how sad that brings down some plans ...what to do [starts thinking]
Pacifist Soldier 2006-08-24 . chapter 13
“Hmm, maybe he’s gay, too.”

With that line, I finally gave up laugh supression and let it all out for about ten minutes.

Delmar's usual apathy is hilarious, and Gaia and Iggy's exchange is well written. Overall, another well done chapter. Keep up the good work.
LIPSTICK,FLAMINGOS,ROCKROLL 2006-08-24 . chapter 13
hm... i wonder if he is gay! lol! hahahahahaha!! cant wait till next chap!
Yellow Eggplant 2006-08-23 . chapter 12
Wow!! This story is so amazing!! Each time the guys ruined the house I couldn't help but cringe and worry with Nina. Haha, something like that happened to me before so it was funny to read how someone else would reacte to that. Well I hope you update soon...like now!
Heaven-Sent00 2006-08-21 . chapter 12
Aw, that was cute! And here I thought they where going to kiss:)(shows what a hopeless romantic I am huh?) Anyway, I like this story! It's good, update soon plz!
Heaven-Sent00 2006-08-19 . chapter 1
Cool! Your on my favs:D
LIPSTICK,FLAMINGOS,ROCKROLL 2006-08-18 . chapter 12
for some reason i was expecting them to kiss... o well... still cant wait till next chapter!
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