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Genato
2008-03-27
ch 32,
OH MY GAWD! Sh#t! WHY THE HECK DO YOU ONLY HAVE 16 REVIEWS? I READ YOUR STORY WITHT HE JC PETERS PENNAME AND YOU GUYS HAVE SO MANY LITTLE REVIEWS! THIS STORY IS FREAKIN' AMAZING! I was really on te edge of my seat with the events happening. I really hated Ormand for doing what he did and releasing the evil side of Tir. I was really reading the stuff as fast as I can before the chapter entitled memories of home cos I knew that Cia and Tir would meet again there. I knew that Ormand was an evil bastard. GR. And even if Tir did very evil things, my heart still goes out for him in the end. I don't blame him for really killing people and wreaking havoc coz of what he experienced. I'll read the sequel now. This is such an amazing fic and it's been on my mind for days. It's just really well-written, grammar's good, plot always exciting, enough details and breathtaking characters. I'm a fan of happy endings thougha nd although it was such a melancholic, sad and frustrating ending, I still think it fits the story and is really great. Please continuue on writing even if you get few reviews.
chicky991
2008-03-27
ch 32,
Another completely beautiful story. Now I have to go and read the first one again. Hopefully there’s another part to come? You have a wonderful talent!
BWeep
2008-03-27
ch 32,
Aw..
"Treasures" has a whole new feel to it for me, now that I've read this.
I still like Treasures more though. =)
It feels like the story was not really about Tir after he took the Ormand's offer, though.
Tir is col.. Just wish you could have dragged out the end a little longer to show him and Acialinde spending time together.
littlewitchgirl77
2007-10-18
ch 1,
good
zyryon
2007-03-24
ch 19,
Oh why do you torture him so? Poor, poor Tir. He's my favourite character too! *sob* Now I really want to glomp him, the sad, sad guy. *hugs Tir*
Aneedegorarose
2006-09-22
ch 15,
So impressive, this story is so amazing. It's characters are so powerful i love it
Bartimaeus
2006-09-12
ch 2,
I like this Chapter, a young women falling in love with a soilder and waiting for him to return from war, sounds wonderful. The story is very compelling and makes me want to keep reading. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
JC Peters
2006-05-18
ch 9,
aw...i love tir! and that cal kid is a byotch. question: why do you have so many A names? it's kind of distracting to me...oh well
JC Peters
2006-05-18
ch 7,
it's weird to see cia when she's not all grown up and stuff. although for a moment i wanted them not to interact and just let tir go completely lonely.
JC Peters
2006-05-18
ch 6,
"Looks like she’s been through the mill" Zehn said looking -- i think you meant to type something else...like Aena. oh and the lst chapter was pretty good, i don't remember what it was but there was a quote i really liked it in...
chicky991
2006-04-05
ch 8,
oh Tir you sexy beast. no wonder Cal’aene hates him, takeing that beauty away. i love how everything is unfolding. and yet again i sit waiting for the next part.
Mystic Water Bender3
2006-04-04
ch 1,
Oh wow. This was really good. Aside from a few grammer mistakes, I really enjoyed reading it. I have my own writing to get back to now though, so I'll read the rest later. This was great, keep up the good work!
Alice
2006-04-04
ch 8,
I really liked this chapter.. Tir is such a good person! Great story
chicky991
2006-03-21
ch 5,
ah ha i have finally read it, or all that there is anyway. it is still extreamly pleasent, i don't usally take to storys with guys as the main character but i'm happy to say that i like this one, please continue...meaning update now
JC Peters
2006-03-20
ch 5,
aw Tir. there are a few typos in chapter 4 in the first few lines after the quote. man you're evil, it's great.
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