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Reviews For:
Phillip and the Ferrari of Fire
Arkash
2006-01-06 . chapter 1
Funny story, smacks righ of Greek Myth.
My only complaint is that you jump from one POV to another. Like you start out with Phillip's POV, then sometimes switch to Hugh. Other than that, it's well done. *_*
Museworks
2005-09-08 . chapter 1
LOL. This was a cool read. Great job!
G. London
The Sounds of Salesmen
2005-08-29 . chapter 1
Simply magnificent.
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