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Reviews For: Phillip and the Ferrari of Fire
Arkash 2006-01-06 . chapter 1
Funny story, smacks righ of Greek Myth.

My only complaint is that you jump from one POV to another. Like you start out with Phillip's POV, then sometimes switch to Hugh. Other than that, it's well done. *_*
Museworks 2005-09-08 . chapter 1
LOL. This was a cool read. Great job!

G. London
The Sounds of Salesmen 2005-08-29 . chapter 1
Simply magnificent.
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