It's lovely and bloody amzing, if I do say so myself. And excuse the pun.

Wow, reading it backwards somehow gave it an entirely different emotional meaning. Reading it from top to bottom made it crash like a wave. From bottom to top it seemed to grow lighter and become optomistic.

Very deep. I like it.

First, this is amazing. Completely amazing, almost putting me to shame. Second, if I understood correctly (right me if I'm wrong) I think one is rejection, second is love, third is sexuality... If I managed to get it right. Then again, I may be completely wrong.

This is fascinating because it is at once simple and complex. Good use of the form. My one suggestion would be to take out some of the punctuation at the end of the non-parenthetical lines and just let it flow on its own. The more you let your form take control, the more meaning will come from the imagery. Good job, I enjoyed this. ^_^