The part about the forest truly spoke to me.

Splendid, esp the final stanza. Full of passion.

Oh my! The pattern in this is delightful - the pattern of alphabetical alliterations, quite original. This poem was delightful and made more so by the lovely diction.

Wow. That was highly impressive. How long did it take you to write that? And it almost makes sense! ;) Teasing--it probably makes perfect sense, I was just too lost in the fun of the words to pay attention to what they had to say. Lazy reader that I am.