   Ellin Louise 2006-05-30 . chapter 1I love the style, where you chose you end your lines... I like the way it reads. |
| backseats on thursdays 2005-09-24 . chapter 1 you should definetly continue this! It leaves the reader wanting more! |
 atalantea 2005-09-04 . chapter 1Short but packed with emotion. :D |
| les petits bateaux 2005-08-29 . chapter 1 I don't know how to put this into exact adjectives, but this is awesome and poignant.
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| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2005-08-29 . chapter 1 Short but sweet, i like it^_^ |
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