Loved when you wrote "hiccup, whisper, sigh" You wrote it so well, that I could practically play it all out, like a movie in my mind...

Hiccup whisper sigh indeed. Very nice touch in this one. I like it. :D The rhythmm is a bit off but you pulled it off. :D

How do you do it...the title seemed to greatly boost this poem and i am in love with it...going in favs it is...and so r u^_^ well done