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great poem

beautiful. and haunting. simply put, i love it.

so simple and so creepily beautiful. i love.

wow. simple, sweet and short. great imagery.

'The Junk Fairy'

wow.that's amazing.

you did necrophilia so x 49267345.2 much better than i did.

interesting.

I like the first line, not how you would think to start a poem about necrophilia.

"Admires the halo around her neck" At first I thought this was maybe referring to a necklace or something, but I've changed my mind (After re-reading it several times) I think it's a reference to ... how do I explain this!? Something along the lines of it's fallen from where it used to be or should be (I.e. above her head) or maybe she was an angel in life and now she's fallen. I don't know. Great poem though, really made me think.

Keep writing!

So powerful in so little words...I like..

~Angel4soul~

Argh. Terrible and beautiful. Necrophilia is always such a weird subject (Christopher moore did it wonderfully- He placed a necrophiliac and a vampire together in the same morgue, and came out with both humour and something disguting and indescribable.) Somehow you've done something different. It's almost sweet, and that's whats truly frigthening about it.

I'm not sure if the italics do anything for the poem. It felt a bit odd. perhaps if you had only a few of those word italicized it wouldn't look quite ass off to me.

Still, great job.

-simpleton

my only criticism is external to your work: i can't say anything worth saying.

this.was.immensely.chilling&flawless...just wow.

the epitome of perfection right there.(thank you for your reviews :j)

short, but pretty, love the whole image that is presented by it, quite a striking scene to say the least

i like it. there's probably enough review on that. How does one beta poetry? It comes out rather nicely though but the concept makes my brain have small explosions in the synapsis.

wonderful.wonderful poem. good job.

M..I love this. Gorgeous.

I'm interested with your simplistic format, it achieves so much in so little space/seeming effort. You have an ease with language, it conjures up grimly pretty images. Creepy, but like I said before, very attractive.