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Siren's Bloodstone 2005-01-10 . chapter 1
Wow. You sum up change very thoroughly. It is something I know all to well especially with college in the horizon. Good job.
It all fades away 2003-05-16 . chapter 1
Great Poem AGAIN! The description is just so great. I mean it. I picture all of it. Thanx for the rviews.

-Hornet-
Lucas Harper 2002-11-12 . chapter 1
Fantastic, brilliant, without peer! This is so emotion charged and well written. Great job!
Applejacks 2002-02-26 . chapter 1
a picture well painted, and a future to wonder about
DarkWalker 2002-02-03 . chapter 1
Great insight. You go pretty deep into stuff.
allie cole 2002-01-09 . chapter 1
I can't think of a single word to describe it...so I'll use more than one alright?
Good format, and imagery. The "thousand yesterdays" part sticks out. Good job!
Yours, -ac-
Aerdwynn 2001-05-03 . chapter 1
*nods* That's nifty. I like ur descriptions, they're good. ~Wynnie
Kittioto 2001-04-28 . chapter 1
Interesting... yet again. I like your style, very deep really.
Wallwalker 2001-04-20 . chapter 1
*nods* Change is like that, yes. ^_^ I don't have any real criticism about this. ^_^
Diviana 2001-04-07 . chapter 1
One word... um... 'GOOD' ^.~ Would you really write a poem out of reviews? That would be so cool...
Dani1 2001-04-03 . chapter 1
delicious...well you said one word! *g* but this is wonderful. It really makes you think...love the imagery!
Astre-chan 2001-02-14 . chapter 1
aw..that was dead cool~ ^o^
kat 2001-02-03 . chapter 1
that's really good, hope you continue writing more!
Lowell Boston 2001-02-03 . chapter 1
Very beautiful. I really like the imagery of the last line and the movement it suggest of a journey. I also like the theme of the individual attuned to the changing dynamics of the world around them, and the significants to thier insignificants (if that makes sense)

Lowell
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