 Siren's Bloodstone 2005-01-10 . chapter 1Wow. You sum up change very thoroughly. It is something I know all to well especially with college in the horizon. Good job. |
 It all fades away 2003-05-16 . chapter 1Great Poem AGAIN! The description is just so great. I mean it. I picture all of it. Thanx for the rviews.
-Hornet- |
 Lucas Harper 2002-11-12 . chapter 1Fantastic, brilliant, without peer! This is so emotion charged and well written. Great job! |
 Applejacks 2002-02-26 . chapter 1a picture well painted, and a future to wonder about |
 DarkWalker 2002-02-03 . chapter 1Great insight. You go pretty deep into stuff. |
 allie cole 2002-01-09 . chapter 1I can't think of a single word to describe it...so I'll use more than one alright?
Good format, and imagery. The "thousand yesterdays" part sticks out. Good job!
Yours, -ac- |
 Aerdwynn 2001-05-03 . chapter 1*nods* That's nifty. I like ur descriptions, they're good. ~Wynnie |
 Kittioto 2001-04-28 . chapter 1Interesting... yet again. I like your style, very deep really. |
 Wallwalker 2001-04-20 . chapter 1*nods* Change is like that, yes. ^_^ I don't have any real criticism about this. ^_^
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 Diviana 2001-04-07 . chapter 1 One word... um... 'GOOD' ^.~ Would you really write a poem out of reviews? That would be so cool... |
 Dani1 2001-04-03 . chapter 1delicious...well you said one word! *g* but this is wonderful. It really makes you think...love the imagery! |
 Astre-chan 2001-02-14 . chapter 1 aw..that was dead cool~ ^o^ |
 kat 2001-02-03 . chapter 1 that's really good, hope you continue writing more! |
 Lowell Boston 2001-02-03 . chapter 1Very beautiful. I really like the imagery of the last line and the movement it suggest of a journey. I also like the theme of the individual attuned to the changing dynamics of the world around them, and the significants to thier insignificants (if that makes sense)
Lowell |