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| Reviews for Wilhelm |
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   Fabian Cortez 9/29/05 . chapter 1Stunning tale portrayed in wonderful description and flow; with an rye impact as a finale. Well Done KEEP WRITING! F.C |
| AlwaysAmberella 9/17/05 . chapter 1 what I wonder, is where you get your muse? Do you experiance bits, or the entire events that you describe in your poetry. and if so, is it exausting? you must have some life. Well done. Solo. |
| Pixie L. Taylor 9/12/05 . chapter 1 I like your style. Unlike most non-rhyming poems, it has a style, a beat almost. Awesome, unique, powerful. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 9/3/05 . chapter 1 Intriguing way to portray such subjects. I like this sort of tone of antiquity. |
| reluctant writer 9/1/05 . chapter 1 This was amazing. You're such a great writer. I loved everything about this poem, every word. I can't even pick out my favorite lines, there are just too many. |
| Tiff 9/1/05 . chapter 1 She worshiped moonlight like a cat swallowing the night sky whole I love that line! I'm a cat lover so that probaly has something to do with it. Love the choice of words! |
| in theory 9/1/05 . chapter 1 "She worshiped/moonlight/like a cat/swallowing the night sky whole," I can only describe this as delicious. Stunning imagery. The piece seems to end on a sad note, almost hopeless. |
| Autumn Dawn 8/31/05 . chapter 1 wow. This reminds me of two friends of mine... your writing is amazing, so unique. Great job with your readers connecting to your words. |
| simpleplan13 8/31/05 . chapter 1 then the front gate.. than I love that last line |
| Abbreviations 8/30/05 . chapter 1 Again, amazed, this was just as impressive as the last poem I read of your's. You have a remarkable way with flow and rythmn that keeps me enthralled and thinking till the very end. - Abbreviations, Open Up My Eager Eyes |
| Maxwell K 8/30/05 . chapter 1 "She worshiped moonlight like a cat swallowing the night sky whole (she was always such a show off when no one was looking!)" wow! I too worship nature and the part of like a cat, because cats dont worship gods and they do ok! "He was the pilgrim orphaned against her religion, but I think like me he didn’t believe in anything anyway. " ! me three! wonderful poem, i love your orginalyity/ orginal style, well to the review u said about my orginal poem thing , after reading this i guess i was wrong, this truely is brilliant and orginal! |
| backseats on thursdays 8/30/05 . chapter 1 amazing |
| method acting 8/30/05 . chapter 1 Wicked. Awesome. Excellent. |
| KwazyKandyPie 8/30/05 . chapter 1 oh, WOW, that's such a unique, deep poem. great job on this one! one of my favorties. my favortie lines were,"They made love in the garden ghosts silent beneath the scream." -kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann- |
| arcane devices 8/29/05 . chapter 1 The format with this piece makes it much more impacting. - Arcane Devices |
