Reviews for Ashes to Ashes - FictionPress.com

Alix Blair 2006-03-31 ch 1,	abuseHello Car-chan ^_^ I'm hear to return the favor of sabatoging your fictionpress account muhahaha...well...no...not really...I'm just bored u.u So, I'm not a huge fan of poetry and shouldn't be aloud to review it, but I liked your poem! It's well written and good in a cliche way (because everyone in the entire world write about love gone bad, but eh, when have we ever cared?) The end is uber random but utterly car =) Which isn't a bad thing... I'm proud of you!
SerialXLain 2006-03-07 ch 1,	abuseHa I loved that ending...so unexpected. I liked the beginning of this the best because the short lines make it seem more...I don't know...detached and desperate? Maybe? God I suck at reviews... love xox
bittersweet suicide 2006-01-17 ch 1,	abuseThe last part kind of caught me off guard. makes me laugh when people do that. I thought this was very deep. Shoved up your **...lmao. even if its not mant to be funny...still did. No offense though
sweetxbliss 2005-09-04 ch 1,	abuseI liked it. It flowed smoothly and you chose great words.
Faithless Juliet 2005-08-29 ch 1,	abusePowerful and passionate, I loved it, and I love your pen name as well. Much love,Juliet.