Everytime a zombie movie is on tv, which is quite often, i think "i wish chicken ice cream would update no remedy" and then sit in a corner and softly cry myself to sleep.

You're mean to your fans.

I see the light. please update

This story ish pretty good so far! Plz update soon or I just MIGHT do something or other!!(that didn't sound so intimidating-.-)

I was wondering when you're going to update?

HEY !! he knows his name now !! and he's met his friend !! ... but his friend could easily find out about him ...
anywho, ur still a genius, and i love ur stuff. update soon.
Ja-ne XD

eyes fall out of head* Shit. Lots of things just went click. You are amazing, you know that?

YES! I was waiting for this for SO LONG! Oh my Gosh...this is CRAZY...you have to update really soon, my heart is POUNDING! And I want your Spector so badly...I WANT HIM HE'S SO SEXY...I have a thing for him.

And he seriously needs to start having a relationship with our dear Devon RIGHT NOW. YUM!

Wow, this is an awesome story. The end of this chapter really had me shocked though. I wonder why Devon lied to Specter? I guess I'll find out in the next chapter.

I absolutely love this story! I really hope that Specter and Devon find Lark; but Devon lied to him. And now, things may or may not go to hell in a handcart. The suspense is killing me, pllease contiue this awesome story.

I can see a lot of potential for this chapter. Right now, i can see about a million different story endings that would all be great, but i'm kind of a afraid that you'll choose a bad one. So don't. Keep on track and you'll be fine. Right now, the most likely ending is really good, although a little transparent, but i can't get into that because i don't even know for sure what the ending is. Not to be over critical, but i think it might have been a tad short, but, i'm not the author and i don't have say in that. I liked the plot twist at the end, and am wondering what really happened to Lark, although i must admit, i did forget about him for a while. Mention him a few more times to keep your readers worried. Emotions are the strongest lock in writing and if you can get your readers to feel what the character are thinking, you've got them. I didn't spot any spelling mistakes, although i'm horrible at spelling so i don't think your story is free of mistakes. Don't hold back on anything yet, so get as grusome as you want, but remember, that some people really, really hat that (i don't have a problem with it) and might shun the story because of it. Just tone it down the omygod that's gross type of things that you might put in there. Other then that, great story, i'm waiting for the next installment.

I like this story so far. Of course, I loved 28 Days Later (my family didn't, but then again they don't know how to appreciate a good movie when they see it) so this story is definitly becoming one of my favs.

ohh my god !! this is probably going to do WONDERS for specters mental stability. woot woot. XD ahh ... anyway, i want to know WHY ! gah !!
and
Where is Lark then !?!?!?
and what the hell happened to him then ?!?!?!
what is devon trying to do by lying ? what is in toronto ??
hm ...
UPDATE SOn !
ps. sorry for the late review. XD i haven't been able to get on the computer until last night/now.
JA-ne ! XD

... this is a HORRIBLE place to leave story, especially such a good one as this, please update? please?

Hey, It's me! I'm back!!

Well, this is pretty gruesome. I'd say it's a perfect horror story!!

yes, yes, i'm sorry about the long wait.

-SapphireIris

Don’t tone down the grossness…ness…whatever…I like it. And you assume wrong, I know Toronto but I don’t live there and I’ve never lived in Canada…EVER. And to be honest with you I know Niagara better than I know any place else in Canada. I should, I’ve been there like, five billion times before.

I used to live in New York about a year ago, near Niagara Falls, and believe me they taught us about Canada…not about the political side of it though, that’s what I really wanted to know. Anyways, wow, Devon, jeez…EAT HIM…no…have sex with ‘im…that’ll teach the little bastard. Anyways, I wanna know more, keep updating or I’ll come eat you myself.

I want Lark, he’s schmexy.