beautiful and filled with emotions. i think this is 1 of ur best. awesome, mez

::snuggles Shazaam:: be happy.. please..? LOVE YOU! *TI*

I think you mean absence not absents

anyhow I like it.. especially the middle & last stanza

As soon as I read the first few lines, an image popped into my mind (my friend's xanga pic in fact...real nice pic, lol). Really good piece, I don't think I have a need to tell you what's wonderful about it because others already said so. Still, I hope to see more soon!

Sumi-chan; What you call love, I call pain.

This is really sweet. It paints a great picture.

not a fav, but its definately good. jsut didnt strike the same chord as other poems have by you. none the less: rock on :D

LOL, Shazaam, it's not "Absents", it's "Absence". Absents is plural for absent. Absence is the state of being absent. LOL, you need to check yourself on those kinds of words more carefully, eh?... the eh again... I'M NOT CANADIAN! lol Oh, well, who cares if I say, "Eh,"? Anyway, you must have been pretty ticked and angry at this person you thought you were close to... It's just so powerful, your words, as simple-sounding (SOUNDING, ok? lol) as they may be... You really get your message across. GOOD JOB! GO SHAZAAM!

beautiful, beautiful poem. I adore the writing and the last stanza just so powerfully written and executed to perfection I love it. wonderful job. :) a beta is a person who rereads another's work, to point out spelling or grammar mistakes.

* noelle