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| sarah1491 2005-09-17 ch 1,   | I like how you use italics to make the important words show up in your poems. Very Nice :) |
| simpleplan13 2005-09-03 ch 1, | I love the last line.. short, but very good poem |
| gooey 2005-09-01 ch 1, | SIGH right on the spot. *clap clap* i love this one. gooey |
| Complications 2005-09-01 ch 1, | Time, is the oddest thing one minutes it's with you, the next it's gone... I live in the past... I like your poem |
| Red Vision 2005-08-29 ch 1, | Wow, you have a beautiful writing style, this poem reminded me about how time can pass slowly and quickly. Look at some of my poetry when you get the chance, bye. :) |