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| GypsyMothra 2005-08-29 ch 1,  | abuseI love the repitition you used. Very nice. It flows great. |
| Slowly Sinking 2005-08-29 ch 1, | abusePowerful piece; the repetition is very effective (except 'see see the little child', it doesn't sound quite right to me; but that's probably just me being strange, lol.) Especially liked the openigng and the ending; great work! |