Reminds me of Phantom of the Opera... -One suggestion- Instead of separating the line "Nothing other than the/Life you have been given,", separate it "Nothing other than/ The life you have been given." (For all of the "nothing" lines, do the same) That'll help the flow of it. I really like this one...

~Maranwe Telrunya

WOW! That's really powerful, and I personally think it has great flow in that it enhances everything you;re saying. The repetition's very effective, too; great work!