Reviews for Gray Hair, Purple Eyes

Reviews For: Gray Hair, Purple Eyes - Reviews: Page 1 of 3

Hana Rui 2006-05-26 ch 8,	abusewow. now that's weird. but interesting, nevertheless. it started out simple enough, and now it's making me wonder whether i had just read the same story i did at chapter one or had somehow lost my way somewhere in between. hm. also kinda makes me wonder where this fic is heading to. i'll stick around and see, so write on! ^__^
Shadow 3013 2006-02-15 ch 2,	abuseHmm. Ghosts, now? Nice.
Shadow 3013 2006-02-15 ch 1,	abuseCertainly a very interesting first chapter, with (to be redundant) very interesting characters. Good job. goes to read the next chapter
CerriC 2006-02-12 ch 8,	abuseMistakes: ""We have go," Agnes said." And, again, only that one. Well, I was painfully confused and none-too-sure that I was reading what was written. And then I remembered that this is /you/ writing, and I just went with it. Entertaining, as always. I'm eager to see where exactly you're taking this. And what happens with the fire... ...did I mention that I collect pink bunnies?
CerriC 2006-02-12 ch 7,	abuseOkay, mistakes first: " defining characteristic or it." That was the only one I caught, lol. And, no, to contradict the narrator: it doesn't make sense!! Lol, I never read Yesterday Was Monday, but I think I'll have to go read something about it so that I'll understand... I'm obsessive-compulsive like that.
WinterDeity 2006-02-04 ch 8,	abuseAmazing! Your fixation with bunnies is exactly like mine with monkeys (and sometimes penguins)! It's flows really nicely and as I finish each chapter, I immediately want to know more! Love ya :D
Kitten Lemonade 2006-01-16 ch 8, anon.	abuse...0.0 SAY WHAT?this is making as much sense as my screen name...I like it!
Jay Costanza 2006-01-07 ch 8,	abuseAh, this makes sense, and yes I am pretending. I love your description in this chapter. I really look forward to reading more, I want to understand!
Learah Kaelar 2006-01-06 ch 8,	abuseWoah...I think... I think...I think I just got off an acid trip or something...wow, this is weird, and it's not helping that I'm listening to 'Amsterdam' by Guster...not helping at all...wow. Maroon bunnies...
Learah Kaelar 2006-01-06 ch 7,	abuse'allo, I'm back and full of reviews because I, like your main characters, am completely and utterly grounded, except my friends are way to lazy to sneak out...as am I. In short, I have lots of time. Fear me.Anyway, you did (sort of) describe Oren. You got his face and hair in, and now I know he has shiny teeth, too! :D I wonder if my group has a 'group greeting'...hm...I suppose it would be 'ciao'...or more likely it's the insanely high-pitched squeal we emit before tackling the other person to the ground:D Yes.Wo...next chapter time...
Learah Kaelar 2006-01-06 ch 6,	abuseNaw, your fight descriptions pretty good, although the fights I've been in with boys usually involve rolling around hitting the other person wheneverthe chance might come...with girls it's maybe a slap or two, and thats it, really...so. Agnes is now my hero, by the way, so YEA! Blessed be
Learah Kaelar 2006-01-06 ch 5,	abuseWow. That was...blunt, although somehow I wasn't expecting him to be a virgin, although I don't really know why. It just seemed right. I like Casper's name, by the way, it's cool, but then again, nearly ALL your character's names are amazing, so...yeah...oh! I remember what I was going to say! There's a bit where you missed a word, I think. "...but I still as if I shouold have been more enthusiastic..."Yeah...I think you're missing a word, but that's all the criticism I have to offer, so...ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!
Shiori-san 2006-01-06 ch 4,	abuseBeautifully written, I love how the story is developing so far! The bird bit at the end of the chapter seems a bit random though. Rock on!
Learah Kaelar 2005-12-18 ch 3,	abuseAW!! It's so sweet! No matter what anyone tells ou in these reviews, DON'T CHANGE THIS CHAPTER A BIT! Everything was absolutely perfect, I was positively sqealing with delight when Will kissed him, well no I didn't because I'm at my family Christmas party and they're all yelling about football, so...I squealed on the inside...yes. WO! Blessed be!
Learah Kaelar 2005-12-11 ch 2,	abuseHey! Sorry it took me so long to review this, but I'm here now and wo......YEA!Hehehe...they licked his face...my friends and I do that all the time to each other, hence why we all have a permanent cold. The imagery in this is amazing, by the way, I can see the house PERFECTLY! One thing, though, in the sentence "Shaking off the embarrassment, I looked at Agnes then toward the girl; I don't mean Agnes isn't a girl, even if it sounds like it." The whole part about not meaning Agnes isn't a girl seems really unnecessary. Otherwise, awesome job and I'm going to read more as SOON as I get the time...if that ever happens. Blessed be!

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