I come from the land of Fanfiction(dot)Net and...I never thought I'd see a much more strange site than this place...Love the chapter. Later.

SEE YA!

Oh, how I can relate. Except, well, it was a 3 hour trip to Marching Band state finals on a Greyhound and all but... I like

awesome one shot

i could totally relate! thats what my girlfriend and i do in bathroom stalls of the malls in our place. hahahahaha!! great story! love it!

Hm...I'm suddenly feeling the urge to get on a train for a few hours. Great story by the way.

Heh how fitting that her name is Amber XD

I enjoyed this story, you little perv ^^

The only thing I can complain about is there could be less brackets since it destroys the wonderful flow you create.

Haa if it only were like this in reality. In reality it takes ages to come *cry*

Indeed, long journeys must be anything but boring. X3 This was very good, I think their characters really do suit each other. And there are a few little grammatical errors, but those should be easy to fix. I heart this, and you have a ton of one-shot fictions by the way.

Hey, great job, keep it up

Hehe... It's a great birthday present; thank you, Em. :-) Nice to see the continuation of the ongoing train fic saga. Can't complain at femmeslash, either, or at smut... Nicely done. :-) I'm looking forward to next year's offering... *grins*

~Steve~