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Reviews For: Less than Marvelous
Instant Ninja 2005-11-19 . chapter 3
...not a bad story...

...congrats, btw...best of luck to ya!
Annah A-bomb 2005-11-13 . chapter 3
Squeak. short pause. Fan girl squeal.It was awesome! I loved it.
Fallen Shadows 2005-11-12 . chapter 3
I'm reviewing!! XD anyway, this was an interesting chapter, I liked it. Hope you update soon!
You're My Fucking Delight 2005-11-09 . chapter 3
AH! CRAVING FOR MORE! I FREAKING LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
blue stripe 2005-11-09 . chapter 3
oh my god. i can TOTALLY relate to your story. plus, you executed the plot very well. straightforward yet perfect. i love it. looking forward for your next chapter. UPDATE SOON.
You're My Fucking Delight 2005-11-06 . chapter 2
C'mon update! 2 chaps and i'm freaking HOOKED! please update!
Psycho Parfait 2005-09-07 . chapter 2
Awh. This is so adorable and kyoot! [: Definitely exciting to see a F/F story for once. And one that doesn't make you groan, haha. Great job! Update soon!
Fallen Shadows 2005-09-06 . chapter 2
This is good I like it so far. Hope you update soon
selruth 2005-09-05 . chapter 2
I like this so far, it's put together nicely. The characters are well-described and the dialogue is cute. Looking forward to more.
RisuMusume 2005-09-03 . chapter 2
*loves* Yay! Fem Slash! *giggles* I'm enjoying it...please write more!
UK SUBhuman 2005-09-02 . chapter 2
Sounds interesting so far. Will things get sad? Sad things make me sad.

You should update soon. I'm not usually into femmy-slash but this is good.
Thorn's-girl 2005-09-02 . chapter 2
This is awesome! It can get angsty later, but starting it off happy was brilliant. Like walking up to the cliff before you slip, totally unaware of the rollercoster, in this place emotional, awaiting you. Perhaps I totally overanalyzed that, but whatever. Asesome, awesome, awesome.
Thorn's-girl 2005-09-01 . chapter 1
There is no where near enough f/f on this site...so you need to update. :D

I like the beginning very much. Please write more. God, I suck at reviews...
AKA Anonymous 2005-08-30 . chapter 1
Hm... This sounds familiar...

Hehe
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