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| Neferbast 2005-10-16 ch 1,  | abuseThis poem is just... awesome. It's so beautiful and artful, describing the one you love. It is just... wow. Keep writing. :) |
| ancient trees 2005-09-03 ch 1, | abuseLove the imagery, especially finger painting in the summer time, and 'forever in the easel of my arms.' This was beautiful. |
| Arcane D. 2005-08-29 ch 1, | abuseunique piece, keep writing. - Arcane Devices |
| Isis ShadowWolf 2005-08-29 ch 1, | abusePerfect metaphor. This poem is so heart-breakingly true to life... I love the way you wrote it. |