These are awesome. I love 'em.

Very good. Bravo Cori or Cory or Corie, or you know whatever floats your boat.HEY, go to this website asap: http://w.phxhs.k12.az.us/education/components/messageboard/default.php?sectiondetailid=9677&sc_id=1131859868It's this thing on Ms.Laprade's website for the school and you get extra credit for printing it out. Totally forward this to anyone in english. P.S. I like the imagery in your poem I love how you describe the girl it's so real

Nice. Love the slightly **-off insight. I get a kind of "why can't you be normal?" feel from it... like it.

And your description of my poem is actually pretty accurate. At the time I wrote it I WAS at a party, and everyone else but a friend of mine and I, was downstairs getting drunk and probably worse. We were up in his room listening to music... good job, you get a cookie!

Screamo.

Reading through this...it's interesting to see how you narrate these happenings. Opens eyes. Though, I may be slightly lost when it comes to trying to absorb a general tone from each of these. Maybe it's just my cluttered mind assuming there should be one. Overall, good writing (better then anything i've got ^_^ )

Honey, I am very sure, with no reservations that you write just fine. You cant compare yourself to something of someone else. Always be yourself. Its your best best, you can never lose.

Besides, I wont let you think you've failed at anything. *muah*

weird dream . . . VERY weird . . . and now I'm confused, just a little, but confused anyway.

Don't hate! Dislike greatly to the point of loathing, not only does it sound cooler, but by the time you say it, you start to dislike that phrase more than whatever you were "hating" ^_^ great isn't it