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| SilvinArrow 2006-12-16 ch 17,  | abuseWonderful and quite suspenceful! I can't wait to see what happens next! -SA-> |
| Jeremy Gomes 2006-10-06 ch 1, | abuseFinish Finish Finish! good now that i have that out of my system, been holding it since i first read the book. Great start i cant wait to read the ending (see beginning of post) |
| Marie 2006-08-11 ch 17, anon. | abuseThis is a great story. I just want to keep reading more. There's some bits where i'd love to know more details and some sp mistakes but YOu've put it together and writen it really well. Can't wait for the next chapter |
| Morgan Davis 2006-07-11 ch 17, | abuseoh god! this is so good! the end just kinda jumped out at me though! i wasnt expecting to stop there, lol. hurry and update! |
| Caution 2006-04-17 ch 14, anon. | abuseWOOT WOOT! Good lord, you always have me tugging out my hair wanting more of the story. AND THE PLOT THICKENS! |
| justine dayea 2006-04-16 ch 13, | abuseglad to have found a great piece of work. it always keeps me on the edge of my seat... Keep up the good work!! |
| Sheepsaymoo 2006-01-13 ch 10, anon. | abuseYES another one. I liked this one, it was deep :-) |
| waiting4alifetime 2006-01-13 ch 10, anon. | abusewow...ur 1st story was really amazing and so is this one!wow...i think u would get a better response if you posted this in fantasy section? but anyways the way you write is really good...your plotline is so unique and your characters original...your grammar?...could be improved a bit but im just being pedantic ^^ im totally loving your story~ continue updating! |
| Sheepsaymoo 2006-01-12 ch 9, anon. | abuseWhee What a fun story! I have been waiting for you toupdate! |
| Freetibet 2005-09-06 ch 4, | abuseAww. The flirting is just SO. CUTE. o.O plot twists! I love it! |
| Caution 2005-08-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseo.O Can Ariane be reborn!? |