This is brilliant!keep it up

I like this... it's well written.. the ending is very nicely... sweet poem

Awesome work, I bet alot of people can relate...keep the writting comming!

well detailed and positivly gorgeous, the rhymes added such a fantastic and utterly cute quality to the poem. I love it.

~* noelle

Well-detailed, I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.