Lurrvely! Interesting idea, talented composition, excellent execution! need i say more, darling? luvya! keep the good times rollin', the good stuff comin', okies? Wurn-der-fool! catcha l8er!

You seem angry in the poem-- well the "poet" seems angry..if this isn't based on you... MOVING ON! Wonderful in it's rawness... is that a word? Loved the lines "They nod with knowledge/ Pat with comfort," they fit so well. I really enjoyed it! Wonderful work. Keep it up!

Deep, and well-detailed, I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.

i love this poem it so so true

it's nice to read something that it so true with out the writer going of on one bla bla and missing the point they are trying to get over

keep writen!