you like lilacs, don't you? This paints the picture in my mind of old time england, or how i imagine it, the cobbled streets, the sway and swish of nightly bustle, the cats and dogs, the pretty little poor girl trying to sell lilacs on the sidewalk... it's very beautiful.

fabulous. who knew just a few words could create such vivid pictures? you are marvelous--please continue writing...your pieces are so moving !

great poem. nice imagery. :) keep writing

I like it, I like it a lot--bisque sun-awesome adjective. Also, thanks for the review.

-searchlight

It so sweet... I love it...You should atleast treasure it...

You say onto instead of into. . . that bothers me, dunno why lol.Aside from that, nice. Not my favourite of your works that I've read, but still good. I think I have a thing for angstier poems. *shrug* I particularly like the last 3 lines. Anyway, good job!

'let the lonely lilacs bloom' seems so melancholy. im really liking your writing. . .

AH. My FAVORITE!

My view is that for a bunch of random thrown together lines, they fit very well, show a vast array of mental images and thoughts...in other words, loved it!

~night

I really like this one, it says something different that everyone is trying to say. I think it is about the chaos of feeling you go through when you are in love (I haven't been in love yet though so...)Thank you so much for the reviews!-SilentRiver

Very lovely. The last line held powerful symbolism to me.. like the lilacs all bloom together, but still feel lonely..the whole "alone in a crowd" feel.

This is so beautiful, the words just flow so well together. Like "Let the lonely lilacs bloom" that just sounds superbe. Well done:), and thanks for the review

Hey, i love this poem it's awesome! I like how u discribe it. Good job.

Fantastic poem. I love writing poems like these which they appear not to make any sense until you stumble across them months later and suddenly all is revealed.

I think this could be a poem about spring or the end of winter in which one lonely plant that has survived all alone throughout the winter can watch all of the other animals and plants suddenly coming to life again. I don't know thats just my point of view. Fantastic poem though and thank you so much for the review of my poem.

very telling narrative. sometimes the best flow and word usage comes from not being chained to any specific theme.