Nice poem. ^.^ I liked it.

That was an awesome poem!

~Tzotel

I love the last 2 lines.. very well done

Awesome piece! keep it up! ~Shadows

This is so inspiring - you could make cards and sell them with your poetry like this one - honest!!

Thanks for your trust in God...

This breathes out truth. Amazingly put.

~~Trinity

Powerful and passionate, I really enjoyed it, but I don't agree with you. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.