The format could use some work, as well as some description and better pacing. But all in all it's okay.

It's really good, I thought I was reading a real professional author's book! You spelt one thing wrong, though.

Hey, I just found this story. Way cool concept! Is it too late to ask for another chapter?

IT's great! I love it! It's just as good as the first one maybe even better. HOpe to see ya soon!

Hey mis chicas!

Great story so far! I can't wait to read the rest. I miss ya!

Well written...It's really cool. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Ra'akone

Faaaaabulous story, my dear, but of course I should think so, I co-wrote it! Mwuh hahaha! There were no reviews, so I thought I'd be kind.