A very sound and appealing flow. I love your topic of people's sight being blinded by the commercialization of the world. The use of symbolism seems to be your strength, and that you put to good use.

I really like this one, it's very political; just what we need at election time over her in New Zealand hehe.Sorry I haven't updated or put up any new work lately, I've just been so busy with all my school work (I've got three essays due haha) and moving house (I still haven't unpacked my room yet and we've been living in our new house for about a month!) I'll put up some more work in the holidays; pinky promise! Kitty xox

Wow. Um, what do you want me to critique on it because I think it's great!

Powerful detail and imagry, I really like how you have a innocent style that you chose to write this in.

Much love,Juliet.