You know... I still am waiting for an update on this. I've been checking back, and I've noticed... well, no update. It would be awful if you left this to rot, it has an great start and excellent potential.

Hoping,aladailey

OMIGOSH! Luff! well yah good stuff...and yah. YAY!

-Luff-

Rina

O! the back of my cell phone (battery part) says Diru luv! in purdy shiny stickers! we! er...anyways...lets hope this story goes well ^.^ luff!

Wow! Great start - I'm definitely going to follow this.

I'd like to know more of the four girls, as well. Are they sisters? We know the powers of Kimiri and Yoshimi, although I want to know more about Cathedra and Meguri. :) And Kovico, he seems interesting.

Great, original plot - I love it. Keep feeding me chapters, lol.

Keep writing,

- ala