Interesting (and yeah, kinda creepy). I wonder, did you ever go anywhere with this character?

Daze

the "lock your doors part" i liked. hayley's right! you ARE really good at poetry!

ohh creepy...nice

I like it. That's basically all i've got 2 say. but i REALLY like the way u put sum in italics.;)

that path is too often so hard to find. keep writing =0)