Another review for a great writer! I really like this one beacuse it shows that someone that thinks she has no chances can win over all the other girls who MAY be better. (but not necessarily)

aw very sweet and beautiful

it's good and it's very deep, but a bit more rganization (like not neccessarily rhyme...but rhythm and longer lines)

but it's good

Powerful and passionate, I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.