for the first poem, that one was just real pretty. for this one, i loved how there were all the questions. that went really nicely with the rest of the poem. especially when you repeated the questions.

keep on writing ~~MWR-:|:-

oh empathy, empathy times 2542076.

first two lines and the butterfly wings are wonderful. what a lovely way of interpreting this feeling.

i can relate to this. i like how you used butterfly wings in there. the personification is wonderful. keep writing =0)

I like this a lot. I can really relate. It seems like we're always supposed to be paying attention and doing everything in uniformity..at school and at work, when are you supposed to express any creativity or just listen to yourself and get your thoughts together?

Great work. I especially love this line: it drifts on butterfly wings. Lovely.