This one was good. But you seem to be forcing yourself to make the poems rhyme.

Try free-verse poetry. It allows for more freedom of expression.

very good stuff. I like the flow and the rhyming.

~Sorrow~

Everything has a price, there's no free lunch. You're absolutely right.

Deep, and well-detailed, I loved the tone that you took in this; almost mockingly. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.