As I head backwards in time, your poems seem to flatten out. It's the hallmark of growth.

And in the context of what knights used to be, and still are, this poem is a little shallow.

However, it does have a humorous aspect to it.

Overall: It's good, but it could have been better.

I really like your idea, but your rhyme scheme was kind of annoying; sometimes it's better not to rhyme than to "force rhyme." Good job overall, though. :)

It's got its slightly cheesy feel because of the repetative rhymes but if I try imagining a bunch of knights going somewhere singing it, it suddenly bursts to life. As such, it's hilarious, without being ridiculous. So it's a cool thing.

this is good, i'm always ready for a little mediveal excitment, i like how the voice comes out it this.

Nice rhythm. Have you ever seen the movie "Camelot"?

The second and last stanza are kinda funky, where they rhyme, but it adds character. Is this supposed to be a song?

I really like it, it's mysterious.

Great job with this poem too! It's proud and very cheerleader-esque.

As you could probably tell, I'm a huge fan of all things knightly.

I just wanted to say that you certainly do this some justice!

Heavens! What a lovely poem! Oh, just superb!

I loved it, you take on the same kind of a tone as "lady Shalott" I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.