oh, i really enjoyed this particular poem.

thank you for the critique on my 'exits', i took your advice.

i think this one is going on my favourite stories.

"If you would win my love, you must be broken" wow. just the way this is phrased is gorgeous... I can't believe you wrote this so quickly-it's amazing!

I'm not entirely sure how the title line connects to the poem but i really like it...also liked the choice of words in this piece...words like "boundless purgatory" left an impression. do keep writing =D

I'd contest ur last statement in the description. It's very strong. I don't know, the tone just draws you in. Not sure what else to say. It Speaks

cool poem - interesting. I like how you break up the sentences - great vocab

I think that we all have an internall desire to want to fix broken people; we also love what we know, and for most people who come from broken homes they fall in love with broken people. I really loved this, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.